Friday, June 17, 2011

Bridge to the Future

Thank you creativewritingink.com for this
week's picture!
As always, all comments, criticisms, suggestions
are greatly welcomed.














The journey across to the unknown land
Is made easier with you, holding my hand

Looking over our shoulders, to where we came from
Both trying hard to stay focussed and strong

All that's familiar, destroyed and gone
The attrocities and destruction, so very wrong

Walking all day and into the night
Finally the rope bridge comes into sight

We take our first steps on the wooden structure
And hope we are crossing to a brighter future

4 comments:

  1. So nice and elaborated. Great :) Wanda

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  2. You really are a romantic... =D

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  3. Thank you Wanda and cbcondez! I never thought of myself as a romantic before, but there does appear to be a familiar theme running through my poems. One day I might surprise myself and attempt something totally different!

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  4. cool! It's just so visual poem... I can imagine they are right there hand in hand and happy... :)

    Read mine also, please...hehehe....
    http://lilalily.blogspot.com/2011/07/my-phobia-and-you.html

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